Wednesday, 18 March 2020

Bac blanc: Writing expresion

Lycée Français de Madrid:

Speech LVA:

Hello everyone ! I Hope you are all doing well. I’m standing today in front of you because I want to tell you something very important. Something that will change your life, my life, our life. This city will shine again ! You are now wondering what it could be. I am so pleased to tell you that today and now on you will be very proud of our city. I want to share with you something that is very important for me. You all know that I am very proud of our city. You all know that four years ago I bought the former train station. And we are all here today to inaugurate it. Together ! Because it is only together that we will make this city shine again. It is an honour for me to tell you that. I really hope that the facilities will feed your appetite of happiness ! The building has not only shops, restaurants, coffee shops but also spaces for young entrepreneurs to start their startups and become wealthy and proud men. Thanks to our mutual help we can rebuild this city from the ashes. We will be reborn again as a phoenix. And together we can fly. Our city will attract more and more people. We will no longer be a ghost town. As you now all know everyone can find the happiness he is looking for. Have you ever dreamed of being the happiest city in the USA ? To be recognized in the overall globe ? Today we can be. Today it is our day ! Today we can be !





Sujet 2: 

First of all, we can talk about the facilities that a city can promote. If there are many, most of the people will feel happy without any needs, and without thinking that the grass is greener elsewhere. Of course, if you don’t have what you need people will start feeling unhappy. For example, I have travelled around the world and I can compare cities. In Santiago, in Chile there are problems with social classes. On one hand, there is a minority of people who live really above their needs and on the other, many people can't live properly and they are in need. Water for example: in Chile to buy a bottle of water costs more than one of soda and that being said many people are over weight and most of them don’t feel happy. Otherwise, In Madrid the water Is really accessible and everyone can get the basic type of need: dehydrate.
Secondly, a complete city would be a city that can promote facilities for people with every type of age. If you have the ways Madrid and Montreal are cities that have everything you need except the sea. To replace it, near Montreal you can find big lakes and beautiful landscapes same for Madrid. If you like skiing there are ski station near those cities. If you like climbing and do hiking there are montains near those cities. If you like sport, Montreal have one of the best teams of hockey on ice and Madrid have the best soccer team. They both have their food culture for example in Montreal they are proud of their poutine and iberico ham for Madrid. That being said, those cities have everything a person is supposed to want. It contributes to the happiness of the people.


2 comments:

  1. WRITING 1 (SPEECH) 10 /10
    WRITING 2 (ESSAY) 09/10
    OVERALL GRADE: 19/20
    Very well done overall. Keep up the serious work!
    That said, you never sent me the 'Reading Comprehension'part. A real shame...

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